FLW text analysis pg. 245
In this passage, Fowles uses intense diction and sharp alliteration to create the drama and intensity of the scene as Mrs. Poulteney dismisses Sarah from her service. He describes how Mrs. Poulteney reacts as “crablike clutching and motion she found her wyay to her chair and collapsed.” The repetition of the harsh “c” parallels the harshness of the scene and emphasizes Mrs. Poulteney’s dramatic and over-the-top nature. He explains this is a “simulated swoon,” perhaps not completely real, but partially simulated, this sarcasm does well to characterize Mrs. Poulteney, that she would “fake” pass-out. Fowles again uses diction to create a harsh tone when he says, “the hastily erect housekeeper” and the “throat-clutching Mrs. Poulteney.” The repetition of the “t” and “c” sounds are harsh and these also aid in creating the harsh and climactic tone of the passage. The excitement continues to rise as Mrs. Fairley finally ends the episode by screaming, “You wicked Jezebel – you have murdered her!” Jezebel having a very negative connotation, meaning wicked and shameless, but sounding to the ear more sultry. All in all, Fowles uses diction in this passage to create an exciting and harsh tone and to further characterize the players in his novel.
