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Chapter 19, paragraph 37

Yea i agree the author makes it sound scary how all the people appear in a matter of minutes.

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Posted January 10, 2011  11:11 pm
Chapter 19, paragraph 29

I agree with Remy, every street is unique and has its own value compared to other streets. different stores, better coffee, better food, or worse parking, everything is different.

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Posted January 10, 2011  11:09 pm
Chapter 19, paragraph 19

Yea taking out that much money is suspicious like everyone said. also depositing large amounts of money is way more suspicious than taking out any amount of money. I know it’s random.

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Posted January 10, 2011  11:05 pm
Chapter 16, paragraph 73

I agree even though he means well wearing the uniform it could just end up hurting him.

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Posted December 22, 2010  8:56 am
Chapter 16, paragraph 65

O snap Darryl is alive… Bomb shell…

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Posted December 22, 2010  8:54 am
Chapter 16, paragraph 24

Sounds like he has never felt so free of guilt before?

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Posted December 22, 2010  8:53 am
Chapter 11, paragraph 45

They react with anger because they feel betrayed by the laptop.

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Posted December 14, 2010  10:22 am
Chapter 11, paragraph 40

People are starting to think technology is working against them, something they thought they could trust.

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Posted December 14, 2010  10:21 am
Chapter 11, paragraph 18

Yea everyone is paranoid.

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Posted December 14, 2010  10:17 am
Chapter 6, paragraph 6

Marcus is very observant. And paranoid.

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Posted December 6, 2010  9:39 am
Chapter 9, paragraph 5

I don’t understand why cops can’t just listen instead of pointing out contradictions. If he’s your not going to listen what the point in speaking.

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Posted December 6, 2010  9:37 am
Chapter 14, paragraph 6

I agree just like “weapons of mass destruction”.

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Posted December 6, 2010  9:35 am
Chapter 3, paragraph 34

GOOGLE! even though its not a encyclopedia its a better source the Wikipedia lol

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Posted November 30, 2010  9:56 am
Chapter 3, paragraph 27

I agree very random. Maybe a little foreshadowing next time?

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Posted November 30, 2010  9:55 am
Chapter 4, paragraph 5

I like how he describes the setting of where he is just by hearing.

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Posted November 30, 2010  9:51 am
Chapter 1, paragraph 19

Marcus uses sarcasm to cover up what he is thinking about Benson.

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Posted November 22, 2010  2:36 pm
Chapter 1, paragraph 10

When he refers to his downloads its obvious What the main character cares about most. Technology. Not his trouble with the principal.

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Posted November 22, 2010  2:31 pm
Chapter 1, paragraph 6

I think W1n5ton his “hacker” name the “5″ is the “s” in Winston.

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Posted November 22, 2010  2:27 pm
Hello World! (your tester-post), paragraph 1

Yo

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Posted November 18, 2010  2:21 pm