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Chapter 15

nicholasm7 on paragraph 155

i feel as if the author is attempting to show one of Marcus’s personalities or possibilities through this homless person who is described as around marcus’s age

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Posted June 1, 2011  10:27 am
admirp1 on paragraph 193

It’s cool to see Darryl’s alive but
Marcus had completely forgotten about his old friend until now this shows how much things have drastically changed for them.

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Posted May 31, 2011  9:39 pm
marisabela1 on paragraph 204

I’m glad that marcus was finally able to trust an adult enough to tell them what actually happened to him, especially his mother. Because he was able to confide in her, Marcus’s mother is the only adult that he trusts.

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Posted May 26, 2011  4:49 am
chrismaryc1 on paragraph 100

Of coarse they would think that, the government just wont allow people to have their opinions. They are so paranoid.

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Posted May 24, 2011  11:21 pm
chrismaryc1 on paragraph 49

Thats not a good answer, especially since hes fighting for his freedom. He should have a back up plan as to what government should do instead of hunting down and accusing innocent people.

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Posted May 24, 2011  11:19 pm
rachelm1 on paragraph 57

Since not that much info was provided I dont think they will be able to find him. This isn’t enough info there are way to many people which could fall under this profile. It will be almost impossible to find him.

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Posted May 24, 2011  9:09 pm
matthewp5 on paragraph 13

after seeing the video of what the DHS is willing to do to a US army general I don’t think Marcus realizes what he is getting himself into

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Posted May 24, 2011  9:04 pm
laurenn1 on paragraph 32

I agree with sam about him using sarcasm which is not always heard corrrectly on the other end. People sometimes take things not the right way especially through a text message cause you don’t know the tone of the person sending the text message. I also know this from a personal experience.

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Posted May 24, 2011  7:47 pm
joyl1 on the whole section

It was a smart idea for Marcus to talk to news reporters over Xnet. This is so because his true identity is still concealed. This chapter was very surprising. I did not expect Ange and Marcus to stop talking. Hopefully they will start talking again. The letter came out of no where. I was completely shocked that Marcus would tell his mom everything that happened. He was very strong in the beginning of the story, but now he is starting to crumble.

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Posted May 24, 2011  7:33 pm
samanthar3 on paragraph 32

Marcus is trying to be helpful and make people connect through using sarcasm which is not always heard correctly on the other end. its difficult to tell the attitude of a person through a text message because you are only reading words. i know from personal experience, that things could be taken in all different ways than you originally meant it to be taken in.

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Posted May 24, 2011  5:36 pm
ashleyg2 on paragraph 187

It must have been a comfort to know that someone had been with Darryl through this. Where is Darryl now and is he ok?

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Posted May 24, 2011  5:12 pm
katherinek1 on paragraph 57

Since he didnt give up his full grade profile, idont think that it will be as easy as they think to find him. Of all of the people in San Fransisco without straight A’s, it will probably be extremely complicated to find him.

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Posted May 24, 2011  4:42 pm
paolar1 on paragraph 44

It’s nice to see the title of the book in the context. This is most likely symbolisum. Maybe Marcus is refering to the noobs or new gamers as the little brothers.

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Posted May 24, 2011  4:10 pm
ryanm3 on paragraph 55

this is mad scary if he can do all these things like he said terrorists would be able to do it too and the terrorists could acually use this to plan an attack.

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Posted May 24, 2011  11:01 am
admirp1 on paragraph 32

He was being sarcastic

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Posted May 24, 2011  6:50 am
griffing1 on paragraph 34

Wow. Two positive comments about Marcus in a row. New record. As I pointed out in my last comment and the two ladies before me did, Marcus is finally using his brains to help himself. Throughout this book Marcus has been a selfish and egotistical child. Like Rachel pointed out he is finally telling everyone that he is not the almighty one and that he is equal to others

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Posted December 22, 2010  8:45 pm
griffing1 on paragraph 32

finally i can put a positive comment up. Marcus is finally using his brains by trying to connect to everyone through sarcasm. I think that the people that he is trying to reach would most likely understand his sarcasm

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Posted December 22, 2010  8:42 pm
theodoren1 on paragraph 57

There is not enough information there to find him. There are probably thousands of 17 year olds in San Fransisco who aren’t straight A students. He didn’t give them his whole grade profile it was just a simple statement

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Posted December 21, 2010  1:03 pm
gopikau1 on paragraph 186

All the things that Marcus has been holding inside of him all came pouring out. I think that by telling his mom the truth Marcus will be able to feel a little more at ease. Also, he must feel relieved to know that Darryl is still alive somewhere.

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Posted December 20, 2010  10:51 pm
rachels2 on paragraph 189

huh

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Posted December 20, 2010  9:54 pm
rachels2 on paragraph 34

Usually i percieve Marcus as a “know it all” but for once he takes a stand point that he is equal to others.

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Posted December 20, 2010  9:50 pm
elizabethp on paragraph 188

“Kick them for me.” That is easily the greatest line in the book. Zeb wins.

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Posted December 20, 2010  7:54 pm
melissas1 on paragraph 188

At least this Zeb person knows that their Californian town is not the right place to live. The government is doing the wrong things.

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Posted December 19, 2010  7:01 pm
melissas1 on paragraph 51

All of the security measures are pointless. They don’t help the citizens at all. The adults need to stop being so paranoid.

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Posted December 19, 2010  6:48 pm
melissas1 on paragraph 35

People create their own government. So the corruption is their own faults.

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Posted December 19, 2010  6:46 pm
Liz on paragraph 34

i like how he doesn’t think of himself as a leader and how everyone has as much power as he does.

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Posted December 19, 2010  3:40 pm
dionas1 on paragraph 187

yay! Darryl is still alive!

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Posted December 14, 2010  9:11 pm
dionas1 on paragraph 57

I totally agree with Raven. His answer was very clever but it was kind of careless of him to put his age on their. Also,he previously mentioned that he lives in California. All of this information he is giving out could eventually help the DHS track him down once again.

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Posted December 14, 2010  8:51 pm
dionas1 on paragraph 44

It’s kind of nice to see that although the interview was meant to be directed toward M1k3y, everyone involved in the “movement” responded.

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Posted December 14, 2010  8:47 pm
ravenm1 on paragraph 189

wow, how’s that for inspiration?

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Posted December 6, 2010  6:03 pm
ravenm1 on paragraph 57

he did a good job in answering the questions. i don’t think it was such a good idea to include his age and academic grades. the DHS could now search every school in SAn Francisco for that profile.

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Posted December 6, 2010  5:18 pm
ravenm1 on paragraph 44

title of the book! i’m guessing Marcus later believes in the movement by the name of Little Brother.

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Posted December 6, 2010  5:12 pm
ravenm1 on paragraph 32

smart idea. the only downside of this is that no emotion is really displayed over text, so if he’s trying to use sarcasm, it’s harder to show it over text then it is by voice.

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Posted December 6, 2010  5:08 pm